Spring 2015 Kotei Fiction - Day 4

[Doji Honshingen]

It really should have been made clear that it was just a minor scar added to Matsu's face, but "a cut, across her face" sonds like Daitsu seriously damaged the statue, which would be really rude and doesn't seem very Crane-like to me.
If it is just a scar, it was a cool way to save antagonistically. Just saying it could have been noted in the fiction itself.

[Kakita Ijiwaru]

Sounds nit-picky to me.

[Doji Honshingen]

Well, this small part left a bad taste for me, in an otherwise quiete enjoyable fiction.

[Martino]

That's just something that's going to be divisive, I'm hoping it's as offensive as possible.

[Doji Honshingen]

[Daidoji Tacticus]

Insofar as Daitsu is representative of Kakita, he is proving that Matsu was absolutely right about everything.

I do not regard this as a positive.

[Martino]

The point all along was that both Matsu and Kakita were 100% correct about the other. It drove the conflict. If only one side is right, the conflict goes away and everyone just stands around doing nothing for a thousand years.

[Kakita Shiro]

[Martino]

In the world of L5R, no clan gets to JUST be good guys. EVERYONE is going to have gray areas, character flaws, and compromised morals. If this is ours, we may as well enjoy it.

[Kakita Ijiwaru]